Have you allowed the time to let your copy "sit?" Copy can always be improved by coming back to it a day or two later. Guaranteed you'll find something that can be improved.
I am about to set up a clothing label, is there any website links or info available for people setting up a business for the first time? Also i`ve been told about a type of copywrite where you can post everything you want to be copywritten to yourself through recorded delivery, is this true?